Friday 17 August 2018

Beach Writing

we are learning to add descriptive words in our writing. We are learning to write to make the reader fell a certain way.

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora my name is Ted and I am from Owairaka district school i really liked your blog post about that soon the whole world is gonna get covered in rubbish! i remember a blog post by another person thanks for the post check out my blog copy it and paste it in google bye! https://odsfedorz.blogspot.com/

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  2. Hi Ted my name is Cooper I go to Karoro School. Thank you for the comment I might check out your blog soon.

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  3. Hello Cooper you did a good job on your beach writting and it is amazing how you found all that rubbish. It is sad that a lot of people are littering so much.

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  4. Hi Noah it is Cooper from Karoro School thanks for the comment it is very sad that people litter because it kills the birds and penguins.

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