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Writing - abandoned places

Abandoned places writing

Our learning goals are to:
-write a description using powerful words and phrases
include some Te Reo Maori
Carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling

Choose one of the above images to prompt a piece of descriptive writing

Abandoned City

One day me and TEAM ZOMBS went looking for survivors after the big war. We got dropped/ngahoro off  out of the biggest helicopter in the world by Joe who is one of the ZOMBS TEAM members. Me and James went looking for survivors. We got loaded with guns. I got a flamethrower and James got a MINIGUN.

 I heard something as we were walking through the city and I was like, “Did you hear that James?” He said, “No.” Then he got shot in the leg! I went running/whakaomaoma to him. And I gave him bandages to wrap around his leg. Then we heard gunshots. Me and James went to have a closer look and there were two teams fighting. Then me and James were hiding in the trees until the fight was over. Once it was over  we went back to the abandoned city. There were cobwebs everywhere. I could smell the wet soggy dirt and wild peacocks which roaming around. I could also smell the wet soggy moss on the trees and on the side of the building.

 While I was searching the abandoned city all I could see was broken windows. There were cobwebs in the corners and on the windows. It felt paranormal. I could hear the peacocks screaming in the night. I could hear the birds and all the other animals tweeting and growling.  We could not find any survivors so we went back home. By Cooper

Making A paper plane

Introduction: Hi, today I researched how to make a paper plane. I have made a presentation of the instructions. When you have had a go, let me know how your plane flew, and maybe send me a photo. Smart Blogging.